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Aww... I was expecting Touhou...

Regardless, this piece was okay, but in my opinion the bass was a bit too harsh. It hurt my ears. It also didn't really go anywhere, staying more or less the same throughout the entire piece.

However, my speciality isn't really in this sort of music, so my comments may well be totally out of order, they are simply what I feel.

WeAreBlarg responds:

Thank you very much for your review Hoeloe! I take your critic and I will work on my audio mastering skills.

I agree, too much reverb.

Far too much reverb on this. It's quite difficult to listen to. As well as that, the timings are rather erratic, and it doesn't stick to any sort of constant tempo, meaning that it sounds very jarring, since it's constantly slowing down and speeding up without any real reason. Fix these two things, and you'll have a fairly decent track.

Ocarina-Kid responds:

Thanks for the honesty and tips, appreciate it. Btw I'm a huge fan of your work, your remixes are beyond amazing man.

It's alright.

It was quite good, sounded okay. Not my style of music, really, but I'm not one to rate on that. My beef with this is that it is very hard to hear an actual melody, but it really sounds like you just tried to make something loud & dance-styled without really giving much thought as to a tune. There is a tune there, but it's hard to grasp, and doesn't really do much except repeat. Perhaps a little more variety in the tune, and make the tune stand out a little over the background sounds would make this piece better.

Chimy727 responds:

yea thats a good point...
thanks for the review and criticism!
:D

-chimy727

It's nice...

However, it seems a little messy, the sound all merges together in the louder sections, and it takes away some of the impact. I don't deny it is a good remix, but it could be done better in my opinion. The rhythm seems to go out of sync in certain areas, and the rhythm guitar also. The insruments could do with having a clearer distinction between them.

However, it is very good. 8 stars.

cdskl responds:

Thanks. I'll try to remember that in the future.

Nice, but too much bass.

Nice sounds, but the bass is too dominant, it hurts my ears to listen to it.

Try turning that down a little, and it should sound a lot better.

LuigiSounds responds:

Hmm, i guess that's taste. I liked the loud bass in there :P
Oh well.

I can find only 3 things wrong with this track.

And I shall list them:

1. The crash cymbals are too loud, they drown out a lot of the song.
2. The horns just before the first set of rising notes should not, in my opinion be staccato. It sounds odd to me.
3. I would really like to hear more of a build up in the rising octaves.

Apart from that, this is totally epic. Great job, particularly the end of the loop.

Oney responds:

yeah you're spot on. i tried updating it,but ng wont let me :(

It was a'right

It was quite good to begin with, but then that really high pitched, fast "instrument" came in, and it really did it no justice. The pacing of it was just out, so it sounded as though random notes had been slapped together. Remember that something doesn't have to be impossibly fast to be good.

Kajenx responds:

LIES!! :D

Hmmm...

Really didn't like this. The instruments themselves are fine (except that bass, a bit too much of it). You really caught the wrong mood. You tried to force a sad/slightly haunting melody into a full on halloween special. It really doesn't work. Next time, try not forcing a tune to be something it's not.

ReignOverhead responds:

The point was not to remake it, but to flip the tune into something that it is not. That's what I do for my music.

LOL VECTOR!

Very well done piece. But I should tell you the difference between 'Victor' and 'Vector'. Victor = a name. Vector = a line with a specific direction (used in maths).

cazok responds:

Ah... My mistake :)

You're right...

Even putting this in techno form, which usually wrecks a song, has kept it great! No way you can hurt this. I still prefer the original though, so 9/10 for you.

Laikros responds:

Many thanks. :3

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