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Hoeloe

A Fantasy Story Post

Posted by Hoeloe Feb. 9, 2008 @ 12:32 PM EST

Ok, Time to start a medieval fantasy story news post. Post in the comments if you want to be included as a character, and I'll try to write you into the next chapter, you can also give a short description of your character, but no guns please, magic and medieval weapons only. The first chapter has a few guys chosen by me already. I'll regularly update with new chapters. Here is chapter 1:

PROLOGUE
Rain poured from the dark sky. A lone figure walked purposefully across the barren fields towards the small pinprick of light in the distance that was the army camp. When finally he reached it, he strode slowly past the hundreds of tents towards the captain's. He opened the flap of the captain's tent and entered. The captain was sitting at a desk, writing. As the man entered, the captain looked up. "You have returned," he said.
"Yes," was the simple reply.
"And?"
"The time is not yet right," the man said, shaking his head. "We must wait."
"Then wait we shall. You may go."
The man bowed slightly.
"Thank you," he said, and left.

Six hundred miles away, the Lord of Newgrounds woke. Tom Fulp sat up and rubbed his eyes. It had been a restless night and the first rays of sunlight were just visible on the horizon. He sighed and stood up, pausing only to flatten out his duvet. He left the large stone room and walked out into the corridor. As he set down the stairs, he paused at the window. A horse and rider were flying at breakneck speed towards the castle. Tom quickly ran back to his room.
Five minutes later, he was rushing to the gates now fully dressed. His brother, Wade was already there, as well as his steward, Stamper.
"What is going on?" Tom asked Wade.
"I have no more idea than you."
The horse and rider finally reached them and Tom recognised the man riding it, who quickly jumped down.
"Denvish! What are you doing here?"
"I have grave news," Denvish replied.
"Speak it," Wade commanded.
"There is a large army camp based not six hundred miles from here with hostile intentions. I fear they mean to overthrow Newgrounds."
"This is grim news indeed," Stamper said.
"That it is," Devish agreed.
"We must make ready," Tom said, drawing the broadsword slung at his belt, "Ready my horse, I must leave as soon as possible."

CHAPTER 1 - The Dark Staff
"It is done." The man said to the captain.
"Excellent."
"We must still wait, we have not yet harnessed the power."
"Then wait we must."
"The enemy is on the move."
The captain paused then, twirling the axe that rested against his chair.
"This news is ominous... but we must wait, we cannot face Newgrounds without the Staff."
The man nodded, and turned to leave.
"Oh, by the way, Drakonik,"
Drokinik turned back towards the captain.
"We must find one worthy of weilding the Dark Staff."
Drakonik smiled.
"I know of such a man. His name is DoogleFlip, he is an old friend of mine and a powerful sorcerer, he will lead us to victory."
The captain merely nodded.

"Wait, we have been called to battle?"
Jokobjcy was sitting in the Rec room in Newgrounds main Portal Control Camp. MinusNick, the Armies Head Wizard had just brought him the news.
"I'm afraid so."
"This must be serious..."
"It is. There is an army ready to attack the land of Newgrounds."
"In that case I should ready my Battalion."
"And I Will rally the Wizards of the Land."
They bowed to each other and parted in opposite directions.

*To be continued*

I did include everyone who sent me their information in that, though not all by name :P You will be named in later chapters, but I need more people.

Updated: 04/05/08 4:36 AM Log in to comment! | Share this!

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17 Comments

Feb. 22, 2008 | 8:44 PM keatnisher says:

heh cool.... i guess

Feb. 23, 2008 | 3:24 AM Hoeloe responds:

I need at least 5 new people to join before I can start on the next chapter.


Mar. 1, 2008 | 8:20 PM chickendance333 says:

you make it Tom seem kinda strange

Mar. 2, 2008 | 6:08 AM Hoeloe responds:

...What?


Mar. 3, 2008 | 11:43 AM flashplayer5 says:

can I be inthe next one? and can I have a huge wang...I mean sword....PM me and tell me id I'm in, and we'll talk more about my character

Mar. 4, 2008 | 2:25 AM Hoeloe responds:

Ok, you are in, PM me with your character's info.


Mar. 13, 2008 | 2:34 PM puredragon222 says:

Yay! Fantasy :)

If I can be in I've PMed my characters info to you :)

Mar. 13, 2008 | 2:38 PM Hoeloe responds:

The idea of this was that you as a character, not your character would be used, but never mind :P


Mar. 18, 2008 | 5:29 PM JAKOBJCY says:

i would like a role in this it might be cooler than ever next time it is posted

Mar. 25, 2008 | 4:03 AM Hoeloe responds:

Ok, I'll add you to the list. Good thing my PC needed a rebuild before this got going.


Apr. 1, 2008 | 4:21 AM DoogleFlip says:

halloooo ive pmd you with my character


Apr. 1, 2008 | 4:21 AM DoogleFlip says:

sorry ive just noticed you're English. Woot! so am i!


Apr. 2, 2008 | 8:47 AM Azutom says:

Cool.
On a side note, I don't like men. I LOVE men.

Apr. 2, 2008 | 10:26 AM Hoeloe responds:

Ok...what?


Apr. 4, 2008 | 6:22 PM MinusNick says:

It would be just fabulous if you included me in this story. I'll PM you my stuff. Gracias.


Apr. 4, 2008 | 6:22 PM PlusNick says:

It would be just amazing if you included me in this story. I'll PM you my stuff. Thanks.

Apr. 5, 2008 | 4:21 AM Hoeloe responds:

OK! CHAPTER 1 IS OUT!

Updated: Apr. 5, 2008, 4:35 AM

Apr. 9, 2008 | 11:31 AM SheepVpower says:

hi..

Apr. 9, 2008 | 4:28 PM Hoeloe responds:

hi.


Apr. 11, 2008 | 7:59 PM flashman16 says:

looks set to be quite good!
i was hinking of making my own stroy thing after my hardest of all ridles is solved (see if you can solve it on my profile ^^)

but yeah, i'm quite good at making up storylines, maybe i could help with writers-block or whatever it's called (just last week i won story of the year at a small competition thing in the library)
i suppose i could become a character as well, pm me or just leave a comment on my page.

Apr. 12, 2008 | 3:50 AM Hoeloe responds:

I should have no problems with writers block, the basic story is just about unfolding itself, I just need characters to flesh it out.


Apr. 13, 2008 | 9:28 PM flashman16 says:

i've got a voting thing going on, on my profile,
can i count on your vote? (lol)

[the vote is that i will either continue my questions so people can go for the cup on my page, or i will start my own storyline, but only much more interactive to the general newgrounder, check my page if you can, all details should be there) :-)]

|*-FlashMan16-*|


Apr. 15, 2008 | 10:24 AM DoogleFlip says:

Heh heh heh.Thanks 4 including me. Trouble is, I'm leaving soon (C my newspost)...

Apr. 16, 2008 | 2:30 AM Hoeloe responds:

Your dad's evil >:C

Anyway, sorry you have to leave, you will be remembered in this story.


Apr. 16, 2008 | 2:39 PM Madminifig says:

You make me face palm so much...

Apr. 16, 2008 | 2:41 PM Hoeloe responds:

Howso? Exactly?


Apr. 21, 2008 | 2:03 PM Bilna says:

great story i luv it.i love every fantasy story and i am picky and this story is at least to me good 5/5


Apr. 29, 2008 | 7:57 AM DoogleFlip says:

HELLO!!!! IM STILL HERE!!!! ISNT IT GOOD!!!!!!

Apr. 29, 2008 | 5:13 PM Hoeloe responds:

Epic. :D

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